tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post2256059525691268588..comments2023-09-11T09:19:38.384-05:00Comments on Sarah Ahiers Writes: No-Kiss BlogfestSarah Ahiershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-83181324757610315682012-01-05T14:29:54.025-06:002012-01-05T14:29:54.025-06:00This is so great. I love your MC's voice. Th...This is so great. I love your MC's voice. Thanks for pointing me toward the No-Kiss Blogfest! My scheduled post went wonky but I got it up. Better late than never, right? :)Adrianne Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18108123882094459747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-40413353634332289382012-01-05T09:05:43.466-06:002012-01-05T09:05:43.466-06:00This just reminds me that I really want to finish ...This just reminds me that I really want to finish reading this ASAP.Austin Gortonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14281239771248780430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-30926891143826198372012-01-03T20:14:25.157-06:002012-01-03T20:14:25.157-06:00Nice, I love the tension! Thanks for adding that t...Nice, I love the tension! Thanks for adding that tidbit in the beginning to give your blogfest entry a bit more context. It was very helpful! Great job; I enjoyed this very much. :) Also I love your character names, especially Izzy!<br /><br />~TRA<br /><br /><a href="http://xtheredangelx.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">The Red Angel Blog</a>Wendy Luhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08048944852796207898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-52876846416796733802012-01-03T16:50:26.072-06:002012-01-03T16:50:26.072-06:00Ooh very fun Sarah! Wish I'd had time to parti...Ooh very fun Sarah! Wish I'd had time to participate in this fest - it's been a long time since I did one! Loved your scene!Rebecca T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11994380364321336824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-3213732017900853292012-01-03T14:11:44.282-06:002012-01-03T14:11:44.282-06:00Wow, wow, wow, lady!!
That was fantastic. Loved ho...Wow, wow, wow, lady!!<br />That was fantastic. Loved how it's from the male POV, also loved the bit about the collar. That part's really interesting. Wish you'd post more :)<br />Ninja GirlNinja Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00901215698632029838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-83191053217059059412012-01-03T12:01:58.418-06:002012-01-03T12:01:58.418-06:00I didn't participate but I really like your en...I didn't participate but I really like your entry. Good of you to use foliage like that to increase the tension.Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-56961805537653261522012-01-03T11:57:19.291-06:002012-01-03T11:57:19.291-06:00YES! Just the right mix of sexy, tense, and funny....YES! Just the right mix of sexy, tense, and funny. Well done, sistah!Matthew MacNishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03264738483763244969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-43359447474672424772012-01-03T11:36:57.954-06:002012-01-03T11:36:57.954-06:00I like the idea of a deadly forest of magic :)
.....I like the idea of a deadly forest of magic :)<br /><br />...just curious though, how long have they been running? The comment about her perfume made me think it's only been like and hour or so, but the impression of the scene made me think it's been days.<br /><br />Sorry, I always think about practical things like bathing/body odour/etc whenever there's chase scenes :)1000th.monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-89989335581819838062012-01-02T23:14:04.266-06:002012-01-02T23:14:04.266-06:00Loved it! What a great idea. I hope I get to rea...Loved it! What a great idea. I hope I get to read more someday!Juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07850344847209933016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-53333194530385055392012-01-02T22:56:03.556-06:002012-01-02T22:56:03.556-06:00teeheehee! i'm pretty comfortable. teeheehee...teeheehee! i'm pretty comfortable. teeheehee! too great!vic caswell https://www.blogger.com/profile/01218698236837610704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-49452511807396023022012-01-02T22:49:26.501-06:002012-01-02T22:49:26.501-06:00The details really hooked, and I'd love the id...The details really hooked, and I'd love the idea of the collar.<br /><br />-AaronThe Blogger Girlzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16915385689799889397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-40542819229204573132012-01-02T22:49:17.523-06:002012-01-02T22:49:17.523-06:00I really like your writing, and your story. These ...I really like your writing, and your story. These two will be kissing soon, I just know it! I also LOVE your Nano 2010 cover featured on your right sidebar. Bet the book is just as amazing.<br /><br />~ <a href="http://thatrebelwithablog.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">that rebel, Olivia</a>Olivia J. Herrell, writing as O.J. Barréhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01107021392937169669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-44898552242342903262012-01-02T22:31:35.011-06:002012-01-02T22:31:35.011-06:00Lovely, wish they would have kissed! I love his at...Lovely, wish they would have kissed! I love his attitude! :DC.V. Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11882270682230422885noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-39660367577220498792012-01-02T21:05:20.014-06:002012-01-02T21:05:20.014-06:00..,just when I was beginning to drool...,just when I was beginning to drool.Lost_without_a_Maphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10025119020296055514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-29467852199439517122012-01-02T19:44:10.743-06:002012-01-02T19:44:10.743-06:00Baha, I loved when he said he was pretty comfortab...Baha, I loved when he said he was pretty comfortable XD That was awesome. The collar concept is really interesting too!KT Simpsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08142350855635462698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-1067305101788715672012-01-02T18:06:56.668-06:002012-01-02T18:06:56.668-06:00Nice no kiss. Way to go Sarah.Nice no kiss. Way to go Sarah.Anne Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05816355522284492131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-82287511751773043842012-01-02T17:27:46.946-06:002012-01-02T17:27:46.946-06:00What a lovely no kiss scene! Makes me want to know...What a lovely no kiss scene! Makes me want to know what happens.<br /><br />Happy New Year!<br /><br />(I joined in too! Thanks to you!)Kaye Manrohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03639814610213100626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-4733316750123215022012-01-02T17:06:50.088-06:002012-01-02T17:06:50.088-06:00I agree with what Tricia said. I want to read more...I agree with what Tricia said. I want to read more about Kiel, and see what other ways he's found to make Izzy blush.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-5898460964220293902012-01-02T16:45:28.226-06:002012-01-02T16:45:28.226-06:00"I'm pretty comfortable" Ha! I'm..."I'm pretty comfortable" Ha! I'm sure I really like Kiel. :)Tricia J. O'Brienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05993110400088806252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-39692576443905892772012-01-02T12:41:05.225-06:002012-01-02T12:41:05.225-06:00Loved it, but the botanist in me got hung up wonde...Loved it, but the botanist in me got hung up wondering if it was plausible that there SHOULD anything growing under the tree. (I'd have thought it'd be too shady or the tree roots would absorb all the moisture.)<br /><br />Would love to hear more about the world you've made where acid drips from trees. : )Kimberlee Turleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04695299361596799423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-32720214723719831642012-01-02T11:30:40.704-06:002012-01-02T11:30:40.704-06:00Ooh! Cool premise and great scene! :)Ooh! Cool premise and great scene! :)Larissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08874147599272424056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-4166622591998134992012-01-02T10:27:00.785-06:002012-01-02T10:27:00.785-06:00Now I am trying to devise a situation in my head w...Now I am trying to devise a situation in my head which will result in the collar making him kiss her. Very interesting world!!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-62592561863323065042012-01-02T10:08:24.807-06:002012-01-02T10:08:24.807-06:00Wow, I love the idea of a collar magically forcing...Wow, I love the idea of a collar magically forcing him onto her and him wanting her and then feeling a duty not to proceed. Very cool! Lots of neat tension.Frankie Diane Mallishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06066659801542129040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-71614620395628208072012-01-02T09:57:22.060-06:002012-01-02T09:57:22.060-06:00Ooh, I love the visuals here. Great job. More plea...Ooh, I love the visuals here. Great job. More please :)Lindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04313619484424363895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-48343707189549813642012-01-02T09:07:22.736-06:002012-01-02T09:07:22.736-06:00Very cool! Love the premise of the collar. Reall...Very cool! Love the premise of the collar. Really adds a wrinkle to the scene. Nicely done! :DJon Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07824815967445843124noreply@blogger.com