tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post4902076434450122928..comments2023-09-11T09:19:38.384-05:00Comments on Sarah Ahiers Writes: Emotion Flash Fiction BlogfestSarah Ahiershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-10370833231493929632012-02-12T22:56:58.682-06:002012-02-12T22:56:58.682-06:00Wow, I loved this. It was very well written.
P.S...Wow, I loved this. It was very well written. <br /><br />P.S. I love your steampunk editing hat!Jess Storkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07001356586353583612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-2572155308992692472012-02-11T12:37:13.967-06:002012-02-11T12:37:13.967-06:00Oooh, I liked this! Very vivid. I'm sorry I o...Oooh, I liked this! Very vivid. I'm sorry I only caught the end of this blogfest! Looking forward to your post for the origins blogfest!Creepy Query Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18115161057496086972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-31257444782062080592012-02-10T22:38:27.701-06:002012-02-10T22:38:27.701-06:00Loved this! What a great last line! :)Loved this! What a great last line! :)Kelley Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06373650788799372118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-34378376652733903742012-02-10T21:46:36.987-06:002012-02-10T21:46:36.987-06:00Nice work! That's definitely some crashing new...Nice work! That's definitely some crashing news to take in.Cortney Pearsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00774060537148628453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-6496465808764841212012-02-10T16:23:58.807-06:002012-02-10T16:23:58.807-06:00Meep! Intense emotion buried under a mantle of num...Meep! Intense emotion buried under a mantle of numb detachment--I love it!Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06636585111057799728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-6002613114555396622012-02-10T15:49:01.092-06:002012-02-10T15:49:01.092-06:00The loneliness I felt was so awful! I felt so sorr...The loneliness I felt was so awful! I felt so sorry for her Gosh!! Great job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00503400522084515874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-42034701351159924202012-02-10T12:10:45.908-06:002012-02-10T12:10:45.908-06:00"Like a wraith" what a perfect descripti..."Like a wraith" what a perfect description. Great job Sarah! So intense!Angela Cothranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09243582290698922119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-73646366603679974402012-02-10T11:36:02.043-06:002012-02-10T11:36:02.043-06:00Wow! This was amazing. And I'm totally there w...Wow! This was amazing. And I'm totally there with her with this news.<br /><br />Still gawking and may need a minute to recoup from reading such an intense moment. :)Cassie Maehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17706774393186819619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-61706159076706863162012-02-10T11:24:08.392-06:002012-02-10T11:24:08.392-06:00Intensely moving. It was a joy to read!Intensely moving. It was a joy to read!Emily R. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03892444969625637064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-74996402416782452142012-02-10T10:30:58.007-06:002012-02-10T10:30:58.007-06:00Did she commit suicide by burning her house down a...Did she commit suicide by burning her house down and then became a ghost? Hmmm...or did she just torch her house? Either way, I felt hopelessness at first which was quickly replaced by anger from the protagonist who wanted to exert some control over her life.Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-50865545793983280032012-02-10T10:23:48.979-06:002012-02-10T10:23:48.979-06:00That was so evocative. I loved the sentence: '...That was so evocative. I loved the sentence: 'The lighter sparked and the fire obscured the dark'. <br /><br />I wondered why she was talking to the silent drapes instead of her dog, though. <br /><br />It left a chill yet had a satisfying ending. Purging those shadows.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-87783589548015244882012-02-10T09:47:41.603-06:002012-02-10T09:47:41.603-06:00I was reading the second to last sentence thinking...I was reading the second to last sentence thinking that was where you should have ended it. Then I read the line below and my eyes bugged out. <br /><br />Really well done!Kimberlee Turleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04695299361596799423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-31560775986817927842012-02-10T09:45:29.236-06:002012-02-10T09:45:29.236-06:00Very nice. I liked the ending quite a bit.Very nice. I liked the ending quite a bit.Southpawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16539290964546504171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-85687180369781597532012-02-10T09:02:50.605-06:002012-02-10T09:02:50.605-06:00Very well done. I want to just give her a hug!Very well done. I want to just give her a hug!Tasha Seegmillerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11489911822054861132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-14410393183539597802012-02-10T08:49:03.942-06:002012-02-10T08:49:03.942-06:00WOW is right. Wow! It's one of those scenes th...WOW is right. Wow! It's one of those scenes that's hard to put your feelings into words after reading it. Again - Wow!Danihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11026644605799767199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-83385358114078282302012-02-10T07:55:28.550-06:002012-02-10T07:55:28.550-06:00Wow, she burned down her house!Wow, she burned down her house!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-92011514982635742782012-02-10T07:40:18.146-06:002012-02-10T07:40:18.146-06:00Oh, that last line was a killer!Oh, that last line was a killer!Sarah Tokeleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273148070092101085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-10487624487624273972012-02-10T07:37:43.167-06:002012-02-10T07:37:43.167-06:00Very well done!Very well done!Kyra Lennonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13853462182450429660noreply@blogger.com