tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post6053170781804807678..comments2023-09-11T09:19:38.384-05:00Comments on Sarah Ahiers Writes: 2nd Annual No Kiss BlogfestSarah Ahiershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-11024957932987839752011-01-10T23:40:49.502-06:002011-01-10T23:40:49.502-06:00Nice. Also, I love how he uses Bilge as a type of ...Nice. Also, I love how he uses Bilge as a type of swear word. Made me laugh.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09222233412304660376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-36209981078379767412011-01-03T18:10:22.105-06:002011-01-03T18:10:22.105-06:00Ah I blinked and had to re-read it! LOL
It's ...Ah I blinked and had to re-read it! LOL <br />It's good to know they got together in the end :D<br />It reads really well and I can imagine it fitting in perfectly to the bigger story.<br /><br />:Dom (<a href="http://www.dominicdemattos.blogspot.com/2011/01/no-kiss-blogfest.html" rel="nofollow">My No Kiss</a>)Dominic de Mattoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05171145945316152596noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-53767660970441512222011-01-03T15:47:09.449-06:002011-01-03T15:47:09.449-06:00thanks everyone!thanks everyone!Sarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-4450291965933333122011-01-03T14:04:06.892-06:002011-01-03T14:04:06.892-06:00Love this! Mom always butting in. Darn it!Love this! Mom always butting in. Darn it!Christine Danekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00979611961825725350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-17187539295710771872011-01-03T12:39:05.669-06:002011-01-03T12:39:05.669-06:00that was great! Especially after having just read ...that was great! Especially after having just read your Show Me post. I love the vibes between these two characters :DRebecca T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11994380364321336824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-31974876656776531652011-01-03T12:10:33.478-06:002011-01-03T12:10:33.478-06:00Oh heavens! Having his Mum come in on such an inti...Oh heavens! Having his Mum come in on such an intimate moment, poor Piers! Great stuff :O)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-21250442721586035332011-01-03T11:03:10.571-06:002011-01-03T11:03:10.571-06:00Awesome. I love the casual playfulness of the enti...Awesome. I love the casual playfulness of the entire thing, before and after. ^_^Loralie Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07134452749240292803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-63905044167856419032011-01-03T06:34:27.532-06:002011-01-03T06:34:27.532-06:00Oh! That was you, with that cover! I loved that co...Oh! That was you, with that cover! I loved that cover! <br /><br />*ahem*<br /><br />The excerpt is great, too. I'd definately pick up that book. <br /><br />T.xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11046724975658216337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-53475768560881858182011-01-03T00:54:35.731-06:002011-01-03T00:54:35.731-06:00Ooh, another blogfest...I wonder if i can do this ...Ooh, another blogfest...I wonder if i can do this after the fact ;)Trishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-26450881482034324172011-01-02T21:52:25.695-06:002011-01-02T21:52:25.695-06:00Awwwww mom!!!!! Hehe, what a sweet post:)Awwwww mom!!!!! Hehe, what a sweet post:)Frankie Diane Mallishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06066659801542129040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-31911819815829068072011-01-02T18:16:36.748-06:002011-01-02T18:16:36.748-06:00Interesting premise. I wish I could've read mo...Interesting premise. I wish I could've read more about the time/world these two are in. Too bad mom spoiled the moment.<br /><b><a href="http://nitewriter6.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Edge of Your Seat Romance</a></b>Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-61929366207073356692011-01-02T16:51:10.884-06:002011-01-02T16:51:10.884-06:00Leave it to the mom to mess up the kiss!
I reall...Leave it to the mom to mess up the kiss! <br /><br />I really liked this, though I feel like there could've been more tension before the kiss. I still really like it though, Pier was adorable.Devin Bondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02778910287345364738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-11024242464275602102011-01-02T15:48:59.622-06:002011-01-02T15:48:59.622-06:00This was cuuuuute. Somehow, Pier seemed completely...This was cuuuuute. Somehow, Pier seemed completely innocent and naive to me...which made it adorable. Th eonly critique I can offer is that some of the dialogue seemed stiff to me, but maybe that has to do with the world they're in?<br /><br />LOVED his Ma's last line haha Great job and thank you for sharing!Jessica Silvahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15405267450788581689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-46067747994203475062011-01-02T15:06:55.887-06:002011-01-02T15:06:55.887-06:00Thanks everyone! And boo on Mom indeed!Thanks everyone! And boo on Mom indeed!Sarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-10111783304883854112011-01-02T14:55:52.074-06:002011-01-02T14:55:52.074-06:00Great stuff! Boo to mom ruining the moment.Great stuff! Boo to mom ruining the moment.Lindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04313619484424363895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-89028588137416484612011-01-02T14:28:50.402-06:002011-01-02T14:28:50.402-06:00That was fun and I really liked Mom's line at ...That was fun and I really liked Mom's line at the end. lolAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-24825845042755120832011-01-02T13:12:41.969-06:002011-01-02T13:12:41.969-06:00This was a fun little scene, I love moms reaction ...This was a fun little scene, I love moms reaction LOL.Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-28738465239273126292011-01-02T13:06:34.341-06:002011-01-02T13:06:34.341-06:00Man, Mom! Parents always seem to have a way of ru...Man, Mom! Parents always seem to have a way of ruining the moment! Great job and thanks for sharing!Kelly Lymanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14773120663217816189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-88330783461266173952011-01-02T11:35:03.389-06:002011-01-02T11:35:03.389-06:00I'm a sucker for romance on a beach. And oh, h...I'm a sucker for romance on a beach. And oh, how embarassing is that? Caught by your own mom! Great piece! :)J.C. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01567971311643106302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-47162696507760800952011-01-02T11:24:59.396-06:002011-01-02T11:24:59.396-06:00ohhh! The Mother's response at the end makes t...ohhh! The Mother's response at the end makes the scene that much better-- the UST is great, here, and they are so cute together.Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-39874411630904658292011-01-02T10:14:40.218-06:002011-01-02T10:14:40.218-06:00Very cute. Such an innocent little scene! Makes me...Very cute. Such an innocent little scene! Makes me curious about the rest of the story...Mara Nashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14628961488068784772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-40668616921464195752011-01-02T08:31:24.339-06:002011-01-02T08:31:24.339-06:00Katie - thanks! And i love the cover too
Tricia -...Katie - thanks! And i love the cover too<br /><br />Tricia - those moms. Always ruining things<br /><br />Anne - Hah!Sarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-79917401653797152022011-01-02T08:24:06.300-06:002011-01-02T08:24:06.300-06:00Sweet Sweet Sweet!!!Sweet Sweet Sweet!!!Anne Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05816355522284492131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-34529363606574121032011-01-02T07:22:57.473-06:002011-01-02T07:22:57.473-06:00Leave it to Mom to spoil a moment! This is a fun s...Leave it to Mom to spoil a moment! This is a fun scene, full of expectation.<br />Happy 2011, Sarah!Tricia J. O'Brienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05993110400088806252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-54307062600698416372011-01-02T07:19:38.480-06:002011-01-02T07:19:38.480-06:00Interesting excerpt - sounds like a fun story! Als...Interesting excerpt - sounds like a fun story! Also love the cover for it down in the right column- cool!<br /><br />Will be back tomorrow to check out your blogfest as well!<br /><br />Happy New Year!Katie O'Sullivanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295418503546522882noreply@blogger.com