tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post840723769900278895..comments2023-09-11T09:19:38.384-05:00Comments on Sarah Ahiers Writes: In Which Dialogue Takes OverSarah Ahiershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-82378295121231552232010-03-16T14:11:56.988-05:002010-03-16T14:11:56.988-05:00Al - damn those characters! Who do they think they...Al - damn those characters! Who do they think they are? Real people?<br /><br />DL - i'm like that too, and i don't think it is cheating, but there must be some reason why that comes to mind...<br /><br />Dezmond - boo on naration. Dialogue is much mor fun!Sarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-92198961338275707132010-03-15T16:28:14.216-05:002010-03-15T16:28:14.216-05:00As someone who's job is to dissect books and e...As someone who's job is to dissect books and examine each and every word, I must admit dialogues are something most writers don't pay enough attention to. I've noticed that many new authors tend to narrate a lot and tell the story in the form of description. That makes books extremely dull and boring. So no matter how difficult it might be, always give your best in writing dialogues.DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-45871559356593105382010-03-15T15:48:06.201-05:002010-03-15T15:48:06.201-05:00I feel that sometimes I write too much dialoge bec...I feel that sometimes I write too much dialoge because it feels so natural to me. Is that cheating?DL Hammonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02007260062331783715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-70062127120599117412010-03-15T15:16:55.908-05:002010-03-15T15:16:55.908-05:00It's not just the dialogue!
It's the chara...It's not just the dialogue!<br />It's the characters, more often the do what they want, not what I want.<br />Sometimes it feels like herding cats!<br /><br />Al<br /><br /><a href="http://publish--or--perish.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Publish or Perish</a>Alhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15625543235578144620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-39232203569881728342010-03-15T15:06:21.579-05:002010-03-15T15:06:21.579-05:00Zen - that is such a good book! also, most of his ...Zen - that is such a good book! also, most of his newer stuff is, meh, compared to his older work.<br /><br />arlee - free association is an almost perfect description<br /><br />Kittie - that's interesting about the dialogue lengths. I've never heard that<br /><br />Barbara - yeah that can be irritating. Fun to write, but sad when you have to cut it <br /><br />Alex - i know! makes me want to give my muse a little slap, try and sober her up a bit...Sarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-78792536518208251732010-03-15T15:06:12.963-05:002010-03-15T15:06:12.963-05:00"Only in real life do I ever have that proble..."Only in real life do I ever have that problem." Awesome comment.Southpawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16539290964546504171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-45184257987593120482010-03-15T14:40:04.155-05:002010-03-15T14:40:04.155-05:00I understand! It sucks when you know where the dia...I understand! It sucks when you know where the dialogue is supposed to go, but it just doesn't want to go there. You're right - redoing it often doesn't help much.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-44445166395249836512010-03-15T12:35:40.901-05:002010-03-15T12:35:40.901-05:00It really sucks when my characters get talking abo...It really sucks when my characters get talking about something that interests me but few others! ^_^Barbara Ann Wrighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01751427987081847906noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-89194577871226720592010-03-15T12:22:09.367-05:002010-03-15T12:22:09.367-05:00Zen's right about what King said. But I'm...Zen's right about what King said. But I'm one of those who doesn't really enjoy Stephen King. I think he rambles. Some years ago, I read that typical dialogue shouldn't be more than three sentences long. Any more than that got the writer in trouble. I find that somewhat true when I'm reading, definitely true if the dialogue runs more than five sentences.Kittie Howardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07756250649095903317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-18376989372885953602010-03-15T11:17:03.883-05:002010-03-15T11:17:03.883-05:00I really enjoy dialogue and find it easier to writ...I really enjoy dialogue and find it easier to write than just the regular prose. I do find myself going off in tangets because I try to imagine real conversation and in real life dialogue often wanders in a sort of free assoication manner at times.<br />That's what I like about Quentin Taratino's movie dialogues -- sometimes they get so off the wall and yet are able to convey what is important about the scene.<br />LeeArlee Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11663942782929929334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-37538212114702044992010-03-15T11:16:45.060-05:002010-03-15T11:16:45.060-05:00This is exactly what Stephen King wrote about in &...This is exactly what Stephen King wrote about in 'On Writing'. This is something he says one should never tamper with or try to control, because the book is supposed to take you where it wants to go. Of course, that's why his books are a kabillion pages long... It's funny. I loved that book so much but haven't read one of his novels since I was 16.Stark Raving Zenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16283012200310967530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-25603968959075418942010-03-15T11:16:09.498-05:002010-03-15T11:16:09.498-05:00Piedmont - yeah it's monday, but at least it s...Piedmont - yeah it's monday, but at least it sounds like you got some writing done so that's good, right?<br /><br />Teebore - i guess i never think about the "hwo woudl this person say that" but i do always think "How can i segue this conversation into a more important topic" sort of deal<br /><br />MR - if it's not important, i don't fight it. But if i absolutely need them to discuss something to move the plot forward, then there will be a fight... to the death?<br /><br />David - boo on tons of revision. I just want enough to make me have fun, not so much that i have to do rewrites.<br /><br />Alexandra - i don't know why ti happens at the most inopportune times, it really drives me crazy. Damn you drunken muse!Sarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-31806942026367480582010-03-15T10:45:07.001-05:002010-03-15T10:45:07.001-05:00Haha, I have noticed that problem every so often. ...Haha, I have noticed that problem every so often. You are so right; it definitely happens especially when you REALLY NEED them to arrive at a certain conclusion. Then, for whatever reason, the characters want to talk about ANYTHING but.<br /><br />I'm like you, though; dialogue is so much fun to write! And I love it when it flows. :)Alexandra Shostakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11517091878608894496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-27336720117608107832010-03-15T10:40:19.420-05:002010-03-15T10:40:19.420-05:00I have trouble with many parts of my writing takin...I have trouble with many parts of my writing taking over! In the first draft, I just let it happen, for the most part. But, sometimes it can result in a ton of revision.Davin Malasarnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09385823575081492949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-39941594940914148002010-03-15T10:32:31.778-05:002010-03-15T10:32:31.778-05:00I generally don't fight the dialogue's new...I generally don't fight the dialogue's new direction even if it's veering off the rails some. Somewhere at some point it seems to work out - plus I never win with the muses. The only time I put on the breaks is when it looks like the story's about to do a swan dive off a cliff.M.R.J. Le Blanchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03770517124639901061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-67721695771265048452010-03-15T10:21:35.628-05:002010-03-15T10:21:35.628-05:00I love writing dialogue. I think it comes from all...I love writing dialogue. I think it comes from all the comics I've read since I was twelve. It's all that descriptive crap that fills the pages between dialogue that drives me nuts. <br /><br />I definitely know what you mean about dialogue being hard to edit. I find that if I just relax and let the character talk through me, the dialogue comes out sending like that character. <br /><br />But once I need to go back and tweak the dialogue for whatever reason, then I have to consciously think "how would this person say that?" and that's always tricky(er), and thus, less fun.Austin Gortonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14281239771248780430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-71345685156000088082010-03-15T08:55:42.612-05:002010-03-15T08:55:42.612-05:00Forgot to subscribe.Forgot to subscribe.Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16915603693944523761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-12869155615168932312010-03-15T08:33:17.589-05:002010-03-15T08:33:17.589-05:00YES! I had this same problem. What was supposed ...YES! I had this same problem. What was supposed to be a very simple welcome home conversation turned into so much more and that in turn drove me to take the WIP in a totally different direction. Good, yes, but now I have to THINK. And it's Monday. UGh!Anne Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05816355522284492131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-20937489692107453322010-03-15T08:08:32.396-05:002010-03-15T08:08:32.396-05:00LMAO! that is still weird to me, because i LOVE it...LMAO! that is still weird to me, because i LOVE itSarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-89959485918055262592010-03-15T07:11:31.297-05:002010-03-15T07:11:31.297-05:00Only in real life do I ever have that problem. You...Only in real life do I ever have that problem. You know how much looooove writing dialogue & by love I mean hate with a burning passion. <br />Practice makes perfect right? RIGHT?!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16915603693944523761noreply@blogger.com