tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post3565402750259482045..comments2023-09-11T09:19:38.384-05:00Comments on Sarah Ahiers Writes: Love At First Sight BlogfestSarah Ahiershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-49015856962847457142010-06-13T20:16:33.395-05:002010-06-13T20:16:33.395-05:00sad yet touching! i don't think it's love ...sad yet touching! i don't think it's love at first sight or anything, but there is love there, you can feel it.<br />WEll done!Kerrinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06808737330801680632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-30162143899911903142010-02-16T15:34:49.089-06:002010-02-16T15:34:49.089-06:00Teebore - i hear you clucking. i will i will, i pr...Teebore - i hear you clucking. i will i will, i promise.<br /><br />Amalia - thanks for stopping by! she's not a werewolf and she can more or less shapeshift into any sort of mammalian form. huge changes take a lot longer (days)Sarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-12512816182349821652010-02-16T10:20:47.061-06:002010-02-16T10:20:47.061-06:00Thanks for sharing this! I'm curious what else...Thanks for sharing this! I'm curious what else Cilka can shapeshift into-- or is she a werewolf? Thanks for sharing!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-91171995773460276612010-02-16T09:32:32.992-06:002010-02-16T09:32:32.992-06:00You're a damn tease. Come on, give us some new...You're a damn tease. Come on, give us some new stuff from this WIP! <br /><br /><i>i seem to never forget the 5 senses in relation to people, but it's something i need to work on when describing other things</i><br /><br />I'm in the same boat. I think when writing about people it's easier because they have five senses, whereas other things usually don't, so it's easier to forget about.Austin Gortonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14281239771248780430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-52425279384751976402010-02-15T16:11:02.099-06:002010-02-15T16:11:02.099-06:00Simon - thanks! i seem to never forget the 5 sense...Simon - thanks! i seem to never forget the 5 senses in relation to people, but it's something i need to work on when describing other things<br /><br />Tara - thanks! and thanks for stopping by!Sarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-84164611216931639042010-02-15T15:08:13.525-06:002010-02-15T15:08:13.525-06:00You've captured her essence beautifully in suc...You've captured her essence beautifully in such a small space.<br /><br />Just adored the last two paragraphs.Tarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09008153523366719973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-1694812275583978432010-02-15T12:47:47.811-06:002010-02-15T12:47:47.811-06:00I like the tastes and scents at the end. Well done...I like the tastes and scents at the end. Well done engaging the other senses, good lady!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-71334904123929466712010-02-15T08:02:19.797-06:002010-02-15T08:02:19.797-06:00Palindrome - ugh. don't remind me. BUT, you...Palindrome - ugh. don't remind me. BUT, you'll be happy to know that doing this blogfest kind of got me a bit excited for it again. A BIT<br /><br />Preyers - thanks so much for stopping by an commenting!<br /><br />Merissa - thanks! And thanks for following!<br /><br />Tiffany - i tried to spread my reading out throughout the day. I found it much easier.<br /><br />Courtney - thanks! And thanks for hosting the blogfest!Sarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-515311953770874132010-02-15T00:14:58.998-06:002010-02-15T00:14:58.998-06:00Ooh, I'm intrigued! Very nice scene. Love that...Ooh, I'm intrigued! Very nice scene. Love that they are talking about loving someone that's gone, and loving someone new. It's beautiful!Courtney Reesehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05027695819270602098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-91084565066745671572010-02-14T23:08:39.715-06:002010-02-14T23:08:39.715-06:00I loved the line, "He wondered if it was poss...I loved the line, "He wondered if it was possible to love a monster."<br /><br />I love this whole blogfest greatness. So great to meet so many other writers! Sad thing is that I am going to be very tired tomorrow if I keep reading all of these...Tiffany Nealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13843374938222817346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-62330237707520767772010-02-14T21:15:56.304-06:002010-02-14T21:15:56.304-06:00...filled with lovely, painful words.
Just wonder......filled with lovely, painful words. <br />Just wonderful! Thanks for sharing with us.<br />MerissaAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04342262917285991152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-59207026516353634742010-02-14T18:43:58.322-06:002010-02-14T18:43:58.322-06:00Such a melancholy scene. I love the gentle unfoldi...Such a melancholy scene. I love the gentle unfolding of it. Very nicely done.<br />Thanks for sharing your words!Monica Enderle Piercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08906580310155422359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-46636969793841462972010-02-14T18:16:19.240-06:002010-02-14T18:16:19.240-06:00Yes! Please finish!! I've been hanging on the ...Yes! Please finish!! I've been hanging on the edge of my seat, wondering how it's going to end for years...YEARS!!!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16915603693944523761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-11328589141708604192010-02-14T17:42:22.715-06:002010-02-14T17:42:22.715-06:00Tricia - thanks! i think i too often use what peop...Tricia - thanks! i think i too often use what people taste and smell like so its something i have to watch<br /><br />Donna - thanks for the compliments! it makes me excited to try and finish this WIP instead of letting it linger<br /><br />Carolina - aww! You always say the nicest things! ((hugs))Sarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-14726627671304802862010-02-14T15:32:33.475-06:002010-02-14T15:32:33.475-06:00Oh my word...it's beautiful. It's fantasic...Oh my word...it's beautiful. It's fantasical, yes, but the emotion feels so human. My favorite:<br /><br />"You can’t imagine what it is like, to have loved so greatly so long ago and to have just a glimpse, a reminder, of that love again."<br /><br />So powerful. Well done, Sarah!Carolina M. Valdez Schneiderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11589934533051907801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-27912964006955598822010-02-14T15:31:14.403-06:002010-02-14T15:31:14.403-06:00"She leaned forward and kissed him gently upo..."She leaned forward and kissed him gently upon the lips. She tasted of good things, rosemary and mint and he was reminded again that she smelled like cedar and dry leaves in the fall.<br /><br />He wondered if it was possible to love a monster."<br /><br />I think these two sentiments go together well. I also very much like the "creature of the moment" line. So much about this scene to love, I'd have to post the whole thing over again in the comments.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing this. I'm not posting a scene myself, but I do think you captured the feeling meant by the blogfest. Well done.<br /><br />.........dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-14165551974997422322010-02-14T15:28:14.020-06:002010-02-14T15:28:14.020-06:00I really like the way her immortality infuses her ...I really like the way her immortality infuses her definition of love. And those final lines about how she tastes and smells to him are gorgeous. Well done!Tricia J. O'Brienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05993110400088806252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-35172794143060483752010-02-14T14:44:47.552-06:002010-02-14T14:44:47.552-06:00Alex - sometimes you just gotta jump in. I remembe...Alex - sometimes you just gotta jump in. I remember the first sex scene i wrote was in a writing prompt with my writing group and to this day it's still one of my favorites.<br /><br />Piedmont - thanks!<br /><br />AchingHope - LMAO! ohhh this was one of the best comments i've ever gotten. <br /><br />Denise - thanks! I guess i didn't really think about how my scene migth be a little melancholy for Valentine's day. Ah well...<br /><br />Palindrome - yeah i'm pretty dark too, but i have my moments. You know how i like to throw in love to really raise the stakes a bit<br />also i love zombieland. "That'll do pig"<br /><br />Roni - thanks!<br /><br />Laura - i often write from a man's POV. I don't know why that is...Sarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-53141865854165621842010-02-14T14:44:20.488-06:002010-02-14T14:44:20.488-06:00You have captured a tone - a different voice - I c...You have captured a tone - a different voice - I can hear the ages past.<br />This marks a different kind of beginning for them both. They know what they are and what they are not to each other next they can see what they can become.<br />ElaineAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-91139796019786573412010-02-14T14:28:42.576-06:002010-02-14T14:28:42.576-06:00Very nice! Love that it's from a man's PO...Very nice! Love that it's from a man's POV.Laura Canonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16574566234310522696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-33510061202689023972010-02-14T13:54:04.153-06:002010-02-14T13:54:04.153-06:00Definitely felt the sadness of the scene mingled w...Definitely felt the sadness of the scene mingled with the sweetness. Great job. :)Roni Lorenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02719679344024635326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-36800337705096648962010-02-14T13:50:59.928-06:002010-02-14T13:50:59.928-06:00I don't think I have a good love scene. I'...I don't think I have a good love scene. I'm too dark and twisty. AND I just watched Zombieland and Shaun of the Dead...I'm just thinking about "Nut up or Shut up" and heading to the Winchester. <br /><br />@AchingHope- You almost killed me right there. I choked on my spit laughing.Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16915603693944523761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-71703288775968211532010-02-14T13:49:11.265-06:002010-02-14T13:49:11.265-06:00This is quite lovely. Her "brokenness" ...This is quite lovely. Her "brokenness" not belonging anywhere. Her loving mortal beings who will leave her behind after they pass on. Very melancholy, yet beautiful. I especially like the last line. <br /><br />"He wondered if it was possible to love a monster"Denise Grover Swankhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08089120954470675439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-41404672720647379852010-02-14T13:23:44.769-06:002010-02-14T13:23:44.769-06:00@AchingHope:
LMFAO!@AchingHope:<br />LMFAO!Anne Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04695186823472404436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5439499929311889062.post-14158552978796623722010-02-14T13:10:26.087-06:002010-02-14T13:10:26.087-06:00Awww... This scene was so sad, and yet sweet. Like...Awww... This scene was so sad, and yet sweet. Like eating chocolate fudge. It's sweet, but it's sad because you know it will make you fat.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09222233412304660376noreply@blogger.com