It's been awhile since I've participated in a blogfest, but this one sounded fun so I signed up.
The deets:
Our idea is that on Friday, May 31st, we will provide a forum to allow anyone interested a chance to tell the blogosphere about their most recent [W]ork [I]n [P]rogress. We’ll guide you by providing a few prompts to answer in your own post
So here we go!
WIP Title: All That Remains
Word Count (projected/actual so far): 100,000/102,000
Genre: YA Fantasy
How long have you been working on it?: Cumulatively: 8 months. But I wrote the first 50K in 2011, then didn't write the remaining 60K until a year later
Elevator Pitch (if you came across an agent in an elevator ride, what couple of lines would you use to summarize your book): A teen assassin sets out on a path to avenge her murdered family.
Brief Synopsis (250 words or less):
Now there’s only one thing left to do: make the Da Vias pay.
Are you looking for a Critique Partner?:
Not currently. Of course, things could always change
Are you looking for a Beta Reader?: Same as above. I've got a couple of Beta readers lined up and waiting
So there you have it! I'm off to see the other entries.
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The deets:
Our idea is that on Friday, May 31st, we will provide a forum to allow anyone interested a chance to tell the blogosphere about their most recent [W]ork [I]n [P]rogress. We’ll guide you by providing a few prompts to answer in your own post
So here we go!
WIP Title: All That Remains
Word Count (projected/actual so far): 100,000/102,000
Genre: YA Fantasy
How long have you been working on it?: Cumulatively: 8 months. But I wrote the first 50K in 2011, then didn't write the remaining 60K until a year later
Elevator Pitch (if you came across an agent in an elevator ride, what couple of lines would you use to summarize your book): A teen assassin sets out on a path to avenge her murdered family.
Brief Synopsis (250 words or less):
In the country of Lovero where families of assassins lawfully
kill people for the right price, sixteen-year-old Oleander “Lea” Saldana sets
out on a path of vengeance against the most powerful assassin family of all.
The list of things Lea can count on in her life has never
been long: her mother will try to poison her to make Lea a better assassin, she
can beat her boyfriend Val in a fight and her bone mask will keep her safe from
the angry ghosts as she kills someone in the night. But when she trusts Val, a
member of the powerful Da Vias, and reveals the location of her home, she is
betrayed and her family is slaughtered while Lea barely escapes as the sole
survivor.
Now there’s only one thing left to do: make the Da Vias pay.
The only problem is, the Da Vias have gone to ground and the
one person who can find them is her missing uncle, banished from the Saldanas
years ago. Even if he can be found before the Da Vias realize Lea escaped their
knives, Lea can’t trust him. Hells, she can’t trust anyone ever again, and
definitely not her uncle’s too-attractive-for-his-own-good apprentice, Alessio,
no matter what her heart and body tell her. How can she trust Alessio when the
last boy she loved destroyed everything? How can she fall for Alessio when
revenge is all she should care about?
But when the Da Vias kidnap her uncle, Lea has a choice: use
him as a distraction to finally kill the Da Vias, or trust Alessio and save all
that remains of her family.
Are you looking for a Critique Partner?:
Not currently. Of course, things could always change
Are you looking for a Beta Reader?: Same as above. I've got a couple of Beta readers lined up and waiting
So there you have it! I'm off to see the other entries.
23 comments:
That sounds good! I'm betting she trust him.
It's really good!
Teen assassin! Now were're talking! Lea sounds like a kick-a** character, which I really like. So glad you shared this with us today. (:
Ooh. Assassin families and vengeance? This sounds like a great concept. Can't wait to see more...one day. =)
You had me at teenage assassin. Awesome!
Your book sounds great!
Ooh, I'm interested :)
Hi Sarah! This sounds really fresh and intriguing! I bet Lea kicks butt! Love that! :D
This sounds like the next intricately plotted summer blockbuster! Teen Assassin? Get out of here! Devilishly creative! Great WIP!!
Ohhh yeah, your story sounds awesome!! Look forward to reading it someday :)
Thanks for stopping by!
Wow, legal assassins! Sounds interesting! Best of luck with it!
Who could resist a teen assassin?
Sounds good, first one so far on the hop that's involved a teen assassin :)
Suzanne @ Suzannes Tribe
Sounds very cool!
Tim
The Other Side
Really interesting, Sarah. Talk about tough love from the mom!
Hey Sarah, I noticed your word count, you are doing great! The plot sounds good too!
Hey Sarah! It's been awhile since I've visited. Love this premise!!! Teen assassin...definitely a YA that draws me in. Good pitch and synopsis! Cannot wait to hear more...
Something about the word assassin always grabs my attention. Sounds great!
You have a wonderfully engaging synopsis there! It's got voice, character, conflict, and setting all wrapped up in a succinct passage!
I'm hooked. Love a romantic conflict like that. And of course, legal, teen assassin ain't a bad idea either ;-)
Tina @ Life is Good
This sounds very dramatic. I love it!
Really like the synopsis; hope it does well at the blogfest :)
Love the addition of the apprentice :-) Makes an intriguing story even more exciting!
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